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BOOK BONANZA

Hi guys. I thought it’s time to update you on some pretty cool events that I’m taking part in.

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The first is the Holiday Book Bonanza. A bunch of authors (including yours truly) have banded together to give you what you’ve been waiting for: fabulous reads at awesome prices. After the workout I’ve given my purse over the last month, it’s the perfect opportunity to treat myself without breaking the bank. I already have my eye on a handful of them. All books come with a discount of at least 40% off their regular prices. The genres are Young Adult, Historical Romance, Contemporary Romance and of course Paranormal & Sci-Fi.
Check us out on holidaybookbonanza.com.

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Guarded is available for $2.99 during the event, so if you’ve been on the fence, now’s the time to strike.

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The Holiday Book Bonanza takes place December 12-14, and there’ll be a Facebook party on December 13 to celebrate the event. Why not pop in? We have giveaways, games, and you get to meet some of us virtually. I’m on at 3:40 p.m. EST and would love to meet some of you.

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Incidentally, my writing guide Show Don’t Tell will also be discounted to (*drumroll*) $0.99, although not as part of the event.

One way or another, we have your holiday reading covered.

But the time after the Holidays can be a complete downer. Ugh.

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Well, not this year. Your favorite authors care about you. To prove it, we’re throwing a Facebook event like no other. ‘Beat The Post-Holiday Blues’ will put the spring back into your step, because starting on December 26, every day one author will give away something to his or her readers. Oh yes. A genuine freebie. This could be anything, from deleted scenes to short stories or even a book. Who knows? Well, come along and you will.

That’s it for now. Note these events in your calendars, because as reader events go, these two are going to top the lot.

EDITORS ARE EVIL

But We Love Them

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A book dies and gets reborn many times before it finds its way into the reader’s hands. We swap scenes, delete chapters, write new ones, delete them, until we’re finally ready to look at our version of Frankenstein’s monster and think, proudly, ‘that’ll do.’

You see, those scars we left behind, continuity errors, jokes that are hilarious even though no longer relevant, they fade into the background, because the book is our baby, and it is beautiful.

Then comes the editor. She’s like the horrible boss that finds fault with everything. Some call her the devil. Not me. I wouldn’t dare. The editor is there to take your creation away. You struggle, you postpone the handover, you make excuses, but in the end reality hits: your work is perfect, and the editor will have no choice but concede this point and worship at your genius.

When I say ‘reality,’ you have to bear in mind that I’m a writer who inhabits many different worlds every month, and ‘reality’ is a rather fluid concept.

While your editor takes her time admiring your prose, you go through a stage of withdrawal. Your friends and family are nice and everything; sure, they care about you, yada yada yada; but the people that really matter to you now live with your editor. Not to worry, a few weeks or months later, they’ll be back with you.

Finally, that wonderful day is here. Except…

What the hell has my editor done to my masterwork? Is she crazy? I’m not an idiot, I knew there might be some minor flaws, but the margin is full of comments. Some are smileys and LOLs, but the rest? Didn’t I do anything right?

So I rant. To myself. I know not to vent at other people, but I’m a willing audience for my own anger. I read and re-read the e-mail that lists her main points, like some sick need for self-flagellation.

And something clicks. Some of her remarks echo concerns I had before, but thought I could “get away with.” So I start on the manuscript and work my way through. I take care of the quick fixes first so I can delete those comments and get some breathing space. The comments that are left will take more effort, not to mention the issues raised in the e-mail, but in my head, the final product takes shape.

By the end of chapter two, magic has happened. I can see the finished book. It will take me weeks to get there, but by God, it’s going to be worth it. And I don’t mind putting in the time. The resulting story will still be my creation, this time without scars. Plus, I’m back in the company of my favorite people.

Once it’s done, I’ll dress it up in a copy edit and some beta reading, but the tough bit will be behind me. Thanks to my beautiful editor who pushes me to deliver the best book I can. Dylan, you rock!

Happy Geekend, everyone!

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I have been so busy recently, I’ve kind of forgotten to get my geek on for a while.

Well, today I caught up.

Let me tell you what I’ve been up to.

First, I played X-COM on my iPad. My ex used to have this game on his computer, and I’d spend hours watching him go on missions, but playing it myself… Boy, it really ramps up my blood pressure.

I had another ten minutes, so I slotted in a round of Stone Age, also on my tablet. Of course the setting was on easy. I wanted to win, after all.

Once I made it out of bed, I engaged in a four-episode veg out in front of the TV. Supernatural, Arrow, The Flash and Supergirl. Here an admission. I’m not really into Supergirl. And although I like The Flash, its characters make the silliest decisions. They vex me, and I hate being vexed. That said, Supernatural was a revelation. I love that show!

Anyway, I checked out Patrick Rothfuss’s blog and placed a couple of bids on this charity auction (for Worldbuilders), then I caught up on my reading. Ilona Andrews’ Sweep In Peace certainly kept me entertained. Her offerings (or rather their offerings, since they’re actually two people) usually do the job. Andrews’ books are never high on my list of favorites, but perhaps I’m doing her (them) an injustice. So to make up for my oversight, let me say this: buy it. It’s really, really fun.

I also reread some of my favorite comics, Lazarus and Hawkeye, while waiting for my food to cook. It’s evening now, and my geek-out is nearing its end.

I enjoyed hanging out, just me and my favorite characters. Why don’t you take a day and spend it how you want? The festive season is about to begin, and no matter how much you may enjoy this time, relaxation will not be part of the experience.

That’s it from me, my lovelies. Have a wonderful and happy geekend of your own.

A NEW BREED OF READER

A few weeks ago, a member of a Facebook book group mentioned that the last five books she read were books she had to grade as three stars. Why was she going through this sudden drought? It made no sense to her. In a way, I think she blamed authorkind.

After I read this, I understood that readers like me had become the silent minority.

You see, before (and after) I became a writer, I was a reader. A voracious reader devouring any book in just about any genre. Fantasy, crime, middle-grade, biographical, humorous, historical… Urban fantasy quickly became a favorite. When I wasn’t reading, I’d reinvent the worlds I’d visited in these books, tweaked events and characters.

I fed on stories.

If I liked a book, I’d recommend it. Sometimes I would talk to my friends about it. In return, they’d recommend books to me, or I’d walk into a shop and read the description on the back of a book.

And yes, some novels were better than others. Book A played in my head for days, book B had quirky characters that I related to, book C had a predictable but well executed plot, book D made me laugh a few times. Perhaps none was perfect, but each had elements I enjoyed. Some I remember fondly fifteen years later, others I forgot within six months. (BTW, I probably had three DNFs (Did Not Finish) in my life.)

I didn’t care about ‘perfect.’ Each book came with a new world. What more did I need? If I had to rate my reading experience for each novel, I’d give it a five out of five, every time. Not four stars, not three, two or one, but the full house. Because even a mediocre book gave me new fodder with which to fill my dreams.

Amazon came along and offered me books at a better price. It was like Christmas online. One click, and a day later you could soar away to far-away places. What would the next book bring? A cool book boyfriend? A baddie who gave me the chills? Trivia about the life expectancy of ladybirds?

But while I was reading privately in bed or on my sofa, the reading community outside my four walls changed, and a new, more ferocious breed of reader was engineered. Meet the reader/reviewer.

This started when Amazon and other retailers passed the job of quality control from trained staff on to the users of their products. Suddenly, the average person on the street was called on as an expert.

Books were no longer just to be enjoyed, but to be judged. How did book A fare when compared to book C? Which aspects did you enjoy? Which parts could have been better? Soon, readers’ expert testimony related no longer just to the enjoyment of a book but to its literary shortcomings, whether they had a writer’s insight or not. How was the author’s writing style? Character development? Pacing?

No area was safe from analysis. Like judging the work of a surgeon. The layman might tell if something went wrong, but suddenly they also knew the precise nature of the physician’s malpractice. And it’s fun, talking with authority about a subject. People listen. Not just people, but your peers.

For this new breed of readers, talking about books they hated is just as exciting as discussing the minutiae of stories they loved. Yet even the few books that stand out don’t escape unscathed, because reader/reviewers simply must nitpick and highlight flaws even in great books. After all, this is the job they were given by the powers that be, and by golly, they will rise to the task.

Opinions about books and ratings now guide readers from one book to another. But make no mistake, they’re just opinions. If twenty reviewers decree the heroine to be whiney, does this automatically mean that I will hate the book? If not, what value are strangers’ opinions to me? And if I agree that the lead character could learn a trick or two from Superwoman, could I not enjoy my Me time, aka kicking back and reading a book that is flawed, anyhow?

Where is the joy of reading? This sense of excitement at opening a new book, not knowing what it will bring? The back cover blurb sounded intriguing, and now I get to spend a few hours with characters I might hate or love, will discover new mindsets, sink into new romances. Even if the plot isn’t as refined as I’d like, and even if the hero sports a look that won’t make my legs turn to jelly. That’s not what Me time is about.

I can’t remember the last time I heard someone say, “I enjoy reading.” Nowadays the catchphrase is, “I enjoy a good book.”

But the pure joy of reading comes from a different place than a listing of a book’s pros and cons. A place deep within ourselves that we open wide to allow a variety of stories inside. It comes from the reader’s immersion in a different world on Monday, finding that one gem of a line in an otherwise forgettable read on Wednesday. Children still have the capacity to do so. Every time my friend’s son starts a new book, I smile. He reads widely and avidly. Yes, on occasion he won’t ask his mom to buy book 2 in a series, but you won’t find him detailing the positives and negatives. Not when he can spend that time picking out his next adventure.

Reviewers perform a valuable service for me, the reader, and for me, the writer. No point disputing that, just as I won’t dispute the merit of continuing this tradition.

My one concern is the joy of reading, and how many deprive themselves of this joy. I have read thousands of books and remember a relatively small percentage. But with the exception of my three DNFs, I enjoyed reading them all. When was the last time you enjoyed reading without putting pressure on yourself to dissect a book? Or has the dissection become part of the process for you?

BOOK 2: A CYCLE IN THE LIFE OF AN AUTHOR

The Silverton Chronicles, Book 2

The already titled, not yet announced sequel to Guarded is in full swing. It’s about to go to the editor for content editing. That involves dissecting my chapters individually, plus looking at the book as a whole to check for voice, consistency, pace, etc.

Sadly, the editor doesn’t do the work for me. She provides reports and gives general suggestions which I may or may not approve. Implementing the changes is a time consuming endeavor.

Once I’m happy with the content, I will beef up the book. I’m not an observant person by nature, so the details you encounter in my books come from a dedicated revision where in just about every scene I must ask myself, where are we? What does the room or person look like? This could be something banal as adding a flower pot in the corner, or adding spice to the fight scenes by giving the characters props they might find in the room. And we’re not just talking about visual clues either. Smells, noises, tactile sensations need to be included for a full-surround experience.

At this point I will send the manuscript to my first beta reader. I’m referring to a beta reader in the traditional sense, i.e. someone who looks at my book with a writer’s eye. Call it a third opinion.

Once I have included their suggestions, I will do two more revisions to pretty up the language. In a first draft, I tend to use vocabulary that is readily available to me, for example “very, large, seems to, push, pull, etc.,” repeated words or clichés. Let me give you an example. If I push a character to the side, you get a general idea of what’s happening. But how much more 3D is it to shove the character, or just nudge her? I will also trim the prose. You deserve to get plenty of story for your buck, but you don’t want a flabby read with unnecessary words. Trust me.

Think we’re done? Yeah. Not quite. Next comes the copy editor. A copy editor tightens the language. Another set of eyes, certainly, but also a different vocabulary. I prefer certain words and often overuse them. Like a teenager who’s just discovered the word ‘whatever.’ A copy editor employs their whole vocabulary to add zest to the book.

Now it’s time for the other beta readers, actual readers who look at my book from their points of view. I have a small pool of lovely readers who ‘get’ my characters and me. Not just that, they’re also incredibly reliable. They are the ones who get first whack at the finished product, at swag and news. Most will simply say “yay” or “nay,” but a few might point out things they liked and things they didn’t.

We’re nearly there. Now that I’ve had some distance from the book, I’ll subject it to one last read, because fresh eyes might spot something I missed earlier, like minor inconsistencies or typos.

Finally, the book goes to the proofreader. Now, it is impossible to eliminate all mistakes, but at this point I have done all I can to ensure you receive a well edited product. If you do have comments or mistakes, please get in touch. I don’t bite, and most changes are a doddle.

Next comes the cover design. In reality I will have commissioned the cover months ago. I begin with a mock-up of an idea that works for me. My awesome cover designer will turn this into a fabulous book cover you’ll want to lick all over. Note that I don’t go for men’s naked chest as a matter of principle. I pick covers that reflect the theme running through the book. Guarded shows a confident woman in a standoff with a wolf. Both are ‘guarded.’ The skirt tells you it’s going to be sexy. Their stances indicate conflict. And there’s going to be werewolves. Book 2 will tie in both with its theme and share some elements of Book 1.

Now it’s time to get the book ready for you, dear readers. The hardcopy and paperback formatting will be done by my lovely formatters who also formatted Guarded. If you haven’t seen the print copies, you should. They’re gorgeous.

I do the formatting for Kindle and Nook/Kobo myself. Sadly, formatting a book sometimes introduces errors that aren’t always caught. I do my best to avoid them, but if you spot one, please let me know.

Finally, I upload the books to the various retailers, make it available for pre-order, and start promoting. Smart Heart Publishing, the outfit with which the books are released, helps with that. As part of my promotion you can expect to find Guarded (Book 1) at a discounted price. Book 2 most likely won’t be discounted for at least four months. I work hard to give you the best book I can, and it takes money to put out the next publication (editors and formatters and designers aren’t cheap). Promotions will also include a Facebook launch party and an extended blog tour.

Hopefully you will enjoy my book(s). If you do, I’d love a review. I read them all, good or bad. If you haven’t yet perused my books, you can find a sample chapter on my website. That way you know what you’re getting into.

That’s it. By now I will have started Book 3, and soon the process starts anew.

A Year In Books

2015 so far
So a friend and I were chatting about writing and taking stock, and she said, “You’ve had a great year. Four titles to your name. Think you can repeat that in 2016?”

I laughed. What else could I do?

‘Show Don’t Tell’ and ‘Conversations With The Dead’ are the only two books I wrote and published in 2015, and they are very short. My two novels, ‘Divide and Conquer’ and ‘Guarded,’ were finished last year and represented nearly a decade of writing and learning.

Don’t misunderstand. 2015 became the year I fulfilled many of my dreams. I’m proud of what I’ve achieved. If I never published anything again, I’d be okay with that. Yet nothing was handed to me. This wasn’t a lottery win or a fairy godmother deal. In addition to working my normal job, I sat (almost) day after day hammering at my keyboard, writing and rewriting, doubting, laughing, crying. My friends, readers and Facebook friends helped me in more ways than I can count, but there have been sacrifices.

I have plans for 2016, but who knows what’s going to happen?

My novella is nearly done, but I don’t know if it’s going to be part of my 2015 portfolio. My next novel is also a chapter away from being finished.

In the end, though, this isn’t about output or earnings or time. Writing is all about the worlds I create and the characters inhabiting them. This is what I want to do. Everything else is secondary.

My Happy Box

(First published as a Goodreads blog post)

As I’m nearing the final chapter of Book Two of The Silverton Chronicles, I showed my favorite scene to two people I’m close to. In it, the two main characters share a moment that is tender and sweet and intimate and, yes, rather funny.

Happy BoxThe real test for a book comes once it is available for purchase by strangers. Some of these strangers might love my book. Some won’t. It is part of the writing and publishing business to accept critical feedback, and my skin has grown thick. In fact, I’d worry if all my reviews were positive.

But this scene, my precious, gentle moment that makes my smile broader with every new read, will never be subject to scrutiny. No troll or unhappy reviewer will tarnish it with unfriendly comments. Nope, I have something special in mind for it. I’m going to print it and add it to my Happy Box.

My Happy Box is especially important to me today. Today I learned that someone I trusted has betrayed me. She used my own account to engage in unethical activities. I’m beyond distraught. She has broken off all contact with me. I’m out hundreds of dollars and might be in other trouble, too.

I’m sick to my stomach.

My Happy Box makes me feel better. A little.

Don’t have a Happy Box? Why not? Mine has been around for about twelve years, five moves, and countless ups and downs. The cardboard box, decorated with faded flowers and jokes from newspapers, contains:
A DVD of Harvey, a film that always makes me smile.
A copy of The Diary of A Nobody and a copy of The Hitchhiker’s Guide To The Galaxy.
A TV listing blurb for an episode of Columbo that simply reads, “A man is murdered.” Still cracks me up a decade after I first discovered it.
Photos of my family and from my childhood.
A sample of my favorite perfume.
And many other things I added years ago, wrapped in kitchen foil, that I’ve forgotten but are sure to make me smile.

On those rare days when I’m ready to give in and cry, my Happy Box box will lift me up.

So what better place to keep my secret happy moment between two of my favorite people (aka characters)? When I’m down, I will sneak a peek, and a mood boost is guaranteed.

Also makes a perfect present.

I love my Happy Box.

How about you? How do you cheer yourselves up? If you made your own Happy Box, what would you keep in it?

UPDATE: GUARDED won LASR’s Book of the Month

Guarded Time

Today I learned that Long and Short Reviews (LASR), who awarded Guarded an amazing five stars (which LASR do NOT just hand out to everyone), nominated it for September’s Book of the Month (Non-Erotic).

Even more incredible are the books that have been nominated alongside Guarded.

Right or wrong, I don’t enter my books into contests/competitions. Nominating my books for awards etc. is exactly what book promotion is all about, and I should really do more of it, but the thought alone makes me feel dirty. That’s why I’m always grateful if others go to the trouble of nominating and/or voting for my books. Thank you!

Update: The votes have been counted and I’m happy to announce Guarded came out on top. My thanks to everyone who voted.

You can read the LASR review here: image.

This comes only a week after Bookbuzzr (you might know it as Fraedo) interviewed me on their blog. You can read the interview here: http://www.bookbuzzr.com/blog/author-interviews/an-interview-with-amazon-best-selling-author-carmen-fox/.

Weeks like this are rare. Writers tend to focus on the negative, on the self-doubt, and I’m no exception. That said, I’m determined to celebrate for once.

I wish all of you a successful week, too.

Interview with Carmen Fox

Just a quick one today. My interview with Bookbuzzr is live on their blog now. Have you noticed that cool flip book on my Guarded page? It allows you to read the first chapter of Guarded free, in a book-like format. That’s just one of the cool features they offer to authors. They are also a great reader platform (Fraedo), where you can discover new books and even play games.

Anyway, to read the interview, please follow this link: http://www.bookbuzzr.com/blog/author-interviews/an-interview-with-amazon-best-selling-author-carmen-fox/.

Show, Don’t Tell

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Immersive Writing at Your Fingertips

I strongly believe in the power of knowledge and learning. Man’s capacity to grasp complex rules and apply them is one of the things that sets us apart from animals. To harness this advantage, we should take a few minutes each day to work on ourselves. Read a newspaper article, watch a documentary, or indeed pick up a reference book.

Writing is my niche. It’s where I put much of my effort and a lot of my money. I have bought books on every writing subject under the sun. Some were excellent, others less so. Yet I was unable to find a book that explains in simple, step by step terms how to show and tell.

One day, years of practice and occasional glimpses of better writing combined in my head like jigsaw pieces to form one powerful Eureka moment.

I had it!

I understood why filter words are bad and how to show them the boot. I got when telling can aid us, and where it doesn’t work. I put my finger on instances where showing misses the mark, and how to do it well. The solutions were simple, powerful and transformative. Given all that, why had these concepts never been explained like that to me?

My writing suddenly took off, the better I got. My stories are more vibrant and immediate, and my characters are able to grab my readers by their collars and drag them along for the ride. If I do come across instances of telling in my text where showing would be preferable, the fix is easy.

Many new and intermediate writers encountered the same problems. They did a neat job of formulating great descriptions, but somehow their characters and plot did not have that 3D quality. A few months later, I looked up from my cocoon and saw others struggling to find their own Eureka moments, so I offered my limited wisdom to a handful of talented people.

Fast forward a few years, and the situation remained unchanged. Limited information bred lackluster books. So I set out to produce a guide, using real examples, that I hope will nudge writers in the right direction. Because the truth is, showing and telling aren’t rocket science, but if done right, they’re sure to give your books lift-off.